I Choose To Rise Comments

Telling, trenchant, poignant... these are some words that come to mind. I think perhaps you live within sight of mountains, so you spontaneously commune with them.

I long to stand upright Though bent with baggage of time Like a mountain I wear a stony face With dreams buried in caves of silence--A wonderful poem.

'the sailing clouds that carry a rain of sorrow'. Beautiful expression, Nosheen

"I choose to rise Like a mountain in love with the sky"

This is true poetry that carries us away! And makes us feel the the temple of creatton besutifully never. And exquiste, contemplative piece so sweet to read and to be remembered.

The power of positive thinking is aptly portrayed in this profound poem of yours. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched

Like a mountain in love with the sky... this is the speciality of the power of your imagination and creativity. It's a great pleasure to read your poetry!

Beautiful I wish I could write like that

This is a majestic poem that desseminates vibes of optimism

A very commendable piece of poetry! I admire your choice! !

Excellent poetic expression

Though last year, I congratulate you now, dear poetess for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Sublimest!

I choose to rise Like a mountain in love with the sky.... fantastic beginning with ideal feeling. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the day.

A well crafted poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece. Simply astounding...10+++

Fantastic poem, Nosheen! Congratulations on poem of the day!

beautiful poem i choose to rise too and realize my dreans

beautiful poem, I choose to rise too and realize my dream

Congratulations for this poem receiving the honor it deserves. It bears your hallmark loveliness and intelligence.

I choose to rise Like a mountain in love with the sky Always gazing up in wonder At the azure splendor of the day And scarlet beauty of eve Fine and poetic. tony

Beautifully expressed with such vivid colorful images. Really well-written. Congratulations on POD, it is well-deserved. : -)