Thursday, August 7, 2008

I Chant, Chant And Chant Comments

Rating: 4.9

Dear God! Do you hear those prayers?
Millions calling you to take new Avatar
Let me recall; what you did aver
Whenever sins sour up and virtues downturn
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Sathya Narayana
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Deepti Agarwal 10 November 2008

Its just like a whack on our souls... there is a need to b awake..let the truth awake in us.. n make this a beautiful place to live.. liked it very much..a strong one..

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Raj Nandy 28 October 2008

I had missed out this one! Your last three lines are really effective & concludes your poem very well! I feel that over the decades as we gradually became tech savy, there has been a gradual degradation in our values esp. in the moral & spiritual sphere! Yet for some 'chants' are more for show & for some to gain mental peace & solace! WE HAVE KILLED GOD INSIDE US! 10/10! -Raj Nandy

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Dr Kamran Haider 19 October 2008

Sathya Bhai, Now I can understand and interpret my own written poem 'Who Will Bell The Cat? ' in a much better way... You have expressed the tormented emotions and thirst for hope in a very honest way... Great minds have great sufferings, as the carry the burden of responsibility on their shoulders. You have a great mind, indeed... God bless you Kamran

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Bob Blackwell 12 October 2008

Sathya, I took this as a great out pouring of pain for the evil and anguish in the World. God, Krishna, Buddha, cannot help us until we are One, that means we have all changed and repented and have become truly One. There is no magic wand. Well written prayer for help. 10/10+ Bob

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 September 2008

10 for this nice prayer. Love it.

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Gargi Saha 21 September 2008

very earnest prayer to god. He'll definitely listen to it.

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Didier Kahungu 12 September 2008

I agree with Subbaraman, he is everywhere, he knows everything and he can everything...thats a prayer.well done

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Absent Wryta 04 September 2008

Prayerful poetry.Spiritual and uplifting. I could pray this poem and still I would learn about faith from this poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 August 2008

You call it a chant. I might call it a prayer of the despair of a faithful man. I will certainly recommend something like this from a good writer. And since the man is faithful. The poem is faithful as well. GW62

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Subbaraman N V 29 August 2008

HE is Omnipotent, Omniscient and Omnipresent!

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Rani Turton 19 August 2008

This is a poem that I appreciated, for the questions it asked and the answers it gave!

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Mamta Agarwal 13 August 2008

like a true poet, here is your prayer to God, to come on earth and eradicate evil. good composition, good question. but we also need to do some soul searching. 10 Mamta

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Indira Babbellapati 13 August 2008

hope u read 'conversations with god...'

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 August 2008

Your prayers will be answered soon by God, I am also praying for this.

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Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2008

God appears only after the arrival of Satan...Then only we feel his appearance there...in contrast...Let the vices bloom to their totality...HE waits to remove them to no begin...Let Him come at His will...10/10

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Ershad Mazumder 10 August 2008

Thanks Sathya. The theme is good. But it appeared to me as nmarration of history. Poetry is never a statement.

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Jyoti Saxena 09 August 2008

satya i am wuth u in chanting to provoke gods back into action! you seem so close to humananity -a rare feat these days!

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Indira Babbellapati 09 August 2008

hw i too wish this planet to be re-created...!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 August 2008

may we found the new land for the new us.thanks for the prayer sathya.

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Rema Prasanna 07 August 2008

God listens Sathya true from heart... God only hears....stellar performance my friend.. very strong powerful like a strong vajrayudha.. listen careful, this poetic ocean is full of sharks and crocodiles.. only God can save.. and watchful minds. thanks for this excellent poem..10 and more stars

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