We were two entangle children
A lifetime ago
He has been my best friend,
Ever since
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Relation between sister and brother is unique. i love this relation too much. Invite you to read my poem DIDI. Thnx for share.
I really like this tribute to your brother from the title right through the last line. The word CELEBRATE is central to the poem, and the rest of the poem shows the two of you celebrating with carefree joy especially in the wonderful accumulation based on the verb RAISED. I like the good humor of ending on WE RAISED HELL. I can think of one more image - WE WERE RAISED TOGETHER! Your brother will surely b e delighted with this poem - What a fine gift to help him across the 5oth year threshold! ! I have a twin sister and a poem for her is overdue. You've goiven me valuable ideas/inspiration.
we spat we kicked we screamed and so much more. How you have expressed your heart with this amazing bond you both share. A similar bond I too share with my brother. Thank you Susan a 10/10
A heart warming poem. I love the celebratory mood of the poem. A wonderful tribute to a brother from a sister. Loved it.