Monday, April 13, 2009

I Carry Words. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sound of love breathes
On me words to curl around
Your heart. Carried with my care
They come tenderly bound.
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Fay Slimm
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Janell Cressman 19 April 2009

lovely, absolutely beautiful, would love to know what you think about my poems, live life, need, soldiers heart and God heals everything. thanks so much! ! AWESOME POEM! ! ! ! !

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Fiona Davidson 13 April 2009

The images just shine through your words Fay...wonderful write....Fi 10+++

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yes you do.. beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Catrina Heart 13 April 2009

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Heart touching piece Fay! nice imagery here...Your warm words flowed so naturally! ! ! 10+++++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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