Wednesday, February 23, 2011

I Care Comments

Rating: 5.0

So you chose to hurt inside
Bleeding for the whole world to see
Yet no one stopped to say they cared
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Lyn Paul 11 February 2019

Sometimes it is like you are not there. Though sometimes I believe we put this great guard up like we do not need anyone. I understand, I care.

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Luz Hanaii 12 February 2019

Yes, we wear masks in order not to get hurt. Thanks you for commenting. Blessings to you.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 September 2018

This is one of the most touching poems I have read. In this world where none cares to see the wonds of humanity I can feel the flagellaion of of one who cares and cries. A great poem that should have been selected as member's poem.

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Luz Hanaii 14 September 2018

Akhtar, Thank you for your kind words.

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Anita Khelawan 20 July 2011

hmmm i learnt a new word today 'flagellation' (: ...i enjoy reading the poem it reminded me of my poems 'Crying' and 'Comforting Words'...I can relate to that longingness expressed in your poem. Well penned, and short and effective

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Malaya Roses 05 March 2011

Compassion might be faded by so much of material's need but compassion is the only way to preserve humanity and sincerity in us. I love this poem and well done. 10 for the wonderful poem.

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Rekha Mandagere 28 February 2011

The concept 'Human nature longs for care and affection, nothing else' is beautifully brought out. Thanks for sharing it.

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