Monday, August 21, 2006

I Captured A Butterfly In A Jar Comments

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I captured a butterfly in a jar
I danced around in the grass for hours
Chasing it down stumbling falling laughing
Making the chase the most rewarding
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Joe Rivas
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Scarlet Red 21 August 2006

this poem got me reading me from top to bottom.. as butterfly has its enchanting beauty, your poem has a different charisma to read... nice piece joe! =)

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Joe Rivas

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Lancaster, California
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