Thursday, February 28, 2008

I Cant Take This Anymore Comments

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I wish that someone just knew
I wish that someone could just see
I wish that I didn’t have to keep lying
I wish that someone would just take the time to ask me
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Greenwolfe 1962 20 August 2008

I'm impressed by the thinking that went into the structure of this poem, but I didn't think the structure helped the poem that much. Still, I do recommend its readind because it is worth getting through. Other poets might well learn from this. GW62

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