I Cant Stop Missing You Comments

I can't stop missing you such a sweet dedication. I have loved it. Thanks

So beautifully written

Like this too. Maybe some work on the rhyme scheme (my POV) might make it even better...

Light years far from your beautiful sound My heart wants to run and eschew But nothing can part me from you...... beautiful lines.. nice poem

the pain of missing someone is so genuine..............keep writing! I invite you to go through my poems.Thank you.

I Can't stop praising you. So natural as if like a fountain it spontaneously came out of your heart! Awesome!

Too ordinary. Nothing exceptional. Expressions lack clarity. I am sorry, it did not appeal to me.

I can not stop missing you, good poem,

Great poem! Well done x

I really love this poem. Missing someone that you really love can be heartbreaking. Hopefully this kind of love will not take you too far to the point of no return. Good write.

Nice work Shard! ! Missing someone is to find them in your thought every new second :)

Seems like I am lost in the crowd Light years away is your beautiful sound Everyday is a haunting raid Still early to go into Hades My heart wants to run and eschew But nothing can part me from you Because I can't stop missing you Great....I love this poem a lot..... -Rain..

I find this beautiful and haunting.

I love the words-Every day is a haunting raid.Your diction is associated with a deep feeling.Thus the words get life in your hand.

very poignant...very touching...but one has to grow out of obsessions sooner or later...

Wow, truelly wonderful

A wonder heartfelt poem, well written.

Wow truly beautiful..very powerful

Your write very beauitful and touchy indeed, i am a new memeber to this site, but i must say i've read a few of your peoms. I have to say they are astounishing indeed. i very much like the repetition in the end!

Another lovely poem - I think I would exchange the word `perspiring` for `weeping`, the latter being more poetic.