Monday, May 2, 2011

I Cant See Comments

Rating: 5.0

when i sit and talk to her
i never really see
she always there listing to me
me and her were like besties
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Danny REBELCHILD McGinnis
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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