I Canot Stop Your Pain Comments

A highly imaginative poem is amazingly executed.it is so philosophical and social poem. I prefer the line....Your pain is yours /Their pain is theirs / My pain is mine. Well done

A realistic approach, we all feel pains of loneliness, but we cannot remove loneliness of all.

We each have our to bare Too many words could damage more and not a word could slay you..... ...... beautiful

It breaks my heart to know you hurt.....well penned..