Saturday, November 25, 2006

I Cannot Write When All Is Well Comments

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i cannot write when all is well
i need the grins that miss a tooth
i need the tolling of a bell
and for a little blackened truth
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Ben Partenay
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Dee Daffodil 01 June 2007

Fantastic poem Ben! ! ! I am truly envious of the ease with which you write! You make words flow like rivers...fantastic! hugs, Dee

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Sandra Fowler 25 November 2006

What a wonderfully wise poem. Creation is not a peaceful state of mind. Your work gains in excellence Ben. Warm regards, Sandra

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