Thursday, April 10, 2014

I Cannot Wait Any More. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Now I have lost all my patience
I cannot wait any more.

I learned to live – with my tears,
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Amitava Sur
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Khairul Ahsan 06 May 2014

I love this poem of silent love. The first two lines of your poem speaks of an impatient mind, the last two of a serene, silent and settled one. A nice poem to read and enjoy. I loved and agree with the comments of Valerie Dohren and Soulful Heart.

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Patricia Grantham 11 April 2014

Ti have loved and lost is better to have never loved at all. Keep hope alive! Nice write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2014

Now I’ll live with your love only Silently alone. lovely lines....10 love to live and believe and that it demands sacrifice and future promises

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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2014

As long as you remember the love Amitava, you have something to treasure.

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Soulful Heart 10 April 2014

so poignant.......................a soulful love that is nurtured in loneliness...........

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