I Cannot Survive Comments

vow beautifull and lovely poem.posted10 surya

wooow its lovely i really liked it

soooooooooooooo lovely.

without my tears i can cry... open your heart and let me live most touching... loved it

this one is really impressive. the smoothness of the words and balance between the meanings and the sounds on the letters give this poem importance and great value. I like this one that I read it more than once. waiting for more

Well penned... Such a lovely poem.. ^-^

I honestly cant say i find anything wrong with this poem. it was brilliant! the only thing i suggest doing is not writing the title in all caps. its kinda annoying just so u know. :) great poem! hugs^-^

brilliant! ! ! a great imagery in a framework of goods rhymes and deep thoughts. Please read up my poem 'beauty of the endless night'.

Wow! this has an AMAZING transition! ! ! I love it :) 10+! ! ! !

that is very strong in my heart.

Hun Great poem one type out though look it over other than that its great use of words -ash

There's not much I can say aside from, the fact that it is deep original and well written, hopefully one of the beginning of more to come

It's amazing, beautiful piece of poetry.................I am in a state of shocked silence in honour of your miracles.