Saturday, November 22, 2008

I Cannot Say... Comments

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I cannot say…
My heart whispers,
silently cajoling me,
urging to give voice to a thousand thoughts,
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Mehreen Tahir
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Jerry Hughes 25 November 2008

................for a person whose mother tounge isn't Engilsh, you most certainly have an excellent command, Mehreen. Cheers, Jerry

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Lynda Robson 25 November 2008

A very melodious poem, well penned, a pleasure to read, Lynda xx 10

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Ivor Hogg 24 November 2008

you do a fine job of saying what you cannot say in well written free form poetic prose

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Katelyn Manning 23 November 2008

It's as if I could have written it myself.I loved your poem.nicely put.keep writing

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Sandra Fowler 23 November 2008

What your heart whispers, your pen will say for you. You need not speak aloud to be heard around the world. Kind regards, Sandra

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