Thursday, October 15, 2009

I Cannot Ask Of You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hate to see you go,
Pride is too much,
too much to overcome,
What is love....
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Cody Brewer
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Quin Faas 18 October 2009

this is the truth. Well written.

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Gold Fish 15 October 2009

As in your machinery piece, there is some fundamental truth in these lines for love is freely accepted and given. No-strings-attached. You don't have to pay for it, ask for it or request it. Nice. +10.

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