Friday, May 12, 2006

I Cannot Comments

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I cannot stay to wear the chains.
I cannot keep my life in death!
I cannot lock my dreams away,
Not for pain, not for pain.
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Sophia White
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Will Barber 13 May 2006

This is amazing. You are very accomplished already, though your biography states you are in high school. The repetition is very effective. Keep writing.

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