I Cannot..... Comments

Surely many many readers can relate to this poem :) Strong write, I agree with Karin.10+. Best wishes. A.

Well you right You need time to relax Good write

Oh how I can relate to how you feel. What a fantastic title. Mothering is the hardest job in the world I would say, and I was not prepared for the reality of mothering. But the years fly by quickly and before you know it, the are grandchildren to love too. Strong writing Sandra. Well worth a 10 being a mother! best wishes! Karin Anderson

i can say it with confidence that one day u'll no longer feel guilty...take it from me, i too passed that stage!

i understand...i am caretaker to my 83 yr. old mom & often feel like there is never enough time & always too much to do...

Honestly written our feelings, well done. thanks

Restrictive and yet, devoted and loyal to routine. And, committed. 'I Cannot.....' represents so many of us who sacrifice our time for family, friends, etc. And we think of ourselves as that 'robot'. There to be commanded. However, there is a blessing in this! To know what one 'can' do and when it is done; is far greater than the one who is not aware. In a way, what is expressed in 'I Cannot.....' is saying a lot about what one 'Can...' when one chooses. Nice.

A Poet appropriate for modern times............good write.............10+++........

'There will be snow in the pathway to shovel', that will be the best thing to do besides preparing breakfast. I am so hungry now You cant believe.10++for your poem Sandra.

Sandra, i really hesitate to say this, as it may result in you scratching me off your reading list, but: It sounds to me, that despite all the chaos, you are just a very good mom, and perhaps spouse, as well....Tho' one as veritably selfless as you, is certainly worthy of at least a trip to Disney World to quell the chaos...lol! ! Nice Write, young lady! FjR '09

atleast you buried you frustration through this fine poem.....10

OOoh - - really identify with this one Sandra - - you verse it so well too - - it is always a juggling trick to fit in any personal time - but keep trying, it does happen I promise....... 10 for this from Fay..xx

written with honesty in our feelings.. touching piece you are a model woman....a super woman... 10+++

good poetization of the honest feelings of a house wife on home-based day to day life...congrats...10

You are right Sandra, household chores of a woman donot allow her even simple pleasures of lift. Wonderfully writen

a very practical write...still i think as a poet you are blessed..the time you spend on creativity will surely rejuvinate and relax you

Versed therapy! ! Fine expressions, Sandra. I hope they helped.......................

well, that is life..and it is always a routine, and we cannot do it in other ways but this.. but at the end, we will be surprised..wow..we ought to be a superwoman..Just be filled with joy in every task we have..and maybe someday, i can come to you, and let's fill that cup of coffee..hows that? he he..just relax, and keep your cool.. Hugs, Meggie psssst..this is a cute and nice piece..i swear.just making you smile here..he he

This is such a great write Sandra....loving the flow from your words....Fi 10++

Life does get into it's routines.