Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Monday, February 20, 2012

I Can Wait In The Rain Comments

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I woke up in the morning
The rain was pouring
And my thoughts were flourishing
Filled with memories
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Neela Nath Das 29 March 2012

Your romantic self spoke here in this poem.Nice expression___I'll invest my patience

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Lizzie O'neill 04 March 2012

This is a powerful and romantic poem, when reading it you know its straight from the heart.

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Louis Rams 04 March 2012

your heart is heavy and tells a story of love sent to you from above. one day your courage will meet what is destined for you, and this much i know, this much is true.

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Pheko Motaung 03 March 2012

Very powerful and passionate poem! Well done

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Unwritten Soul 27 February 2012

I'll wait for you by the rain I'll invest my patience this two lines frame the poem so well...every words you try to pull here really emerged by you mind, a need to tell and share...i am like it, such a perfect fit with the title I can wait in the rain that sounds romantic! haha_Unwritten Soul

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Raj Arumugam 24 February 2012

youthful passionate and rhythmic poem, Anele....love this poem

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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