Saturday, May 17, 2014

I Can Tell Comments

Rating: 2.8

I look into your eyes
and I can tell
by the sparkle
by the little creases on the sides
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Darlene Walsh
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Bri Edwards 11 May 2015

me me we be me. i like. and mine/spine. nothing running DOWN your spine? he must not be doing it quite right. bri :)

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Mazhari David 26 May 2014

Lucky Darlene... I hope that love will never turn its ugly and desperate face on you, put its sullen eyes into yours even for poetry's sake* *

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Hello poet Darleen, a beautiful and powerful piece, well done. Loyd

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Yu-ying Lee 17 May 2014

A great poem. Very lovely.

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