I can't walk alone
The journey is full of risks
All thorns all along the path
My feet bleed leaving me to groan
...
Read full text
A poignant write with vivid images. It echoes fear and a state of bleak and dismal emptiness. Well presented.
When things go wrong one has to take help of others. Very nice and thought provoking comment. My regards.
A person always needs support! i quote, I have been left alone/Like an animal in the wild/With no one to take care and/Show love left by road side as a stone. Pragmatic write! loved reading it..Thanks for sharing...10
Sometimes one has to go through hard times while meeting challenges of life. Thanks for giving your valuable time Sir.
Really walking alone poses many challenges But in the end we find ourselves quiet alone in the journey of life Laid with numerous thorns But there are roses as well Your poem is such a rose, Anil sir
Yeah. One needs to be cheered up for the efforts to meet challenges. Thanks very much Sir. My regards.