Friday, November 9, 2007

I Can'T Unlove Comments

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I try to deny,
I try to lie,
Try not to cry,
But I think that you're my guy,
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courtney helm
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Angel Ofdarkness 13 November 2007

I've been through stuff like this. Trying not to love someone. I love how u made the word 'Unlove' its brings out lots of creativity: D Best Wishes, Angel

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Bill Smith 09 November 2007

that's a great concept 'unlove', liked the repeat of I will never hurt you, adds a bit of power to the end of the poem

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