Monday, December 29, 2008

I Can'T Unlove You Comments

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I can't unlove you
even though your heart
has left me
to wander to another.
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Nick Downer
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Astrid Hardjana 29 December 2008

This poem truly expresses the sadness your break up has brought. In the line 'because they were life', if you made it 'my life' it would make your poem stronger. I felt it when I read 'because you were my world'

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