how sweet your kiss is..
how tender your touch is..
how warm your hug is..
how soft your voice is..
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Aw! This reminds me of my dad except for the kiss part and the dark hair part (it's practically all grey, but don't tell him I said that: D) . But other than that it's exactly how I feel about him. Wish I'd written this.: -) Great poem!
What a lovely poem. I agree, youre obviously in love and unable to express your feelings for some reason. I vote that you tell her :) thank you for sharing with us.
nice love poem...well expressed thoughts about the magic of love!
young man.love has struck you. this is a fine feeling inlove voted10 surya
What a lovely poem. i liked how you contradicted yourself. it made it more poetic.