Monday, February 19, 2007

I Can'T Take It Anymore Comments

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I can’t take it any more:

When I look in your eyes
But no one’s in, inside
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David Taylor
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Dee Daffodil 15 May 2007

It's funny how moods will reflect a different perspective...I read this awhile ago and thought it very optimistic...I read it now...and say to myself...but does ice always thaw? ? ? It's still a very good poem, from your heart. Hugs, Dee

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Dee Daffodil 22 February 2007

Lovely poem David...You've spilled yourself upon the paper with this one...open, but still optimistic in the end. Hugs, Dee

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Tapas Dutta 19 February 2007

i can understand the feelings... and as they say 'the show must go on', it really does.... no matter how dark the moments be... they too will pass...

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 February 2007

David what a fantastic poem on Loss and Loneliness, great writing 10...

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