I can’t take it any more:
When I look in your eyes
But no one’s in, inside
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Lovely poem David...You've spilled yourself upon the paper with this one...open, but still optimistic in the end. Hugs, Dee
i can understand the feelings... and as they say 'the show must go on', it really does.... no matter how dark the moments be... they too will pass...
David what a fantastic poem on Loss and Loneliness, great writing 10...
It's funny how moods will reflect a different perspective...I read this awhile ago and thought it very optimistic...I read it now...and say to myself...but does ice always thaw? ? ? It's still a very good poem, from your heart. Hugs, Dee