. I Can'T Stop Loving Her! (Dark Comments

True love is forever! Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

, .. i absolutely knw the feeling.. it's really hard to move on...GOD BLESS..

i never read this one it's good..i like this part Spitting words that can break a heart! Like branches we fall apart..its really good

hope you've moved on... its good to share... specialy when the readers can relate. 10.

'Her memories torture my head, Loneliness keeps creeping in'..this line caught me.. great write..

expressive beautiful poem...Thanks!

really wonderful expression. i love this poem. thanx for sharing voted10 surya

very expressive....love never dies like any relationship.... its normal to experience that way and start again for a new beginning...a renewal of love.. the acceptance of faults...very nice Eyan.. humbleness shows... 10++++ lovelots, maia

i agree with all the other comments. this poem is extraordinaire! . you have talent. keep it up.

honestly! ! i loved it! ! no wordx 4 dis poem! ! so frm ur heart i guess: D

oh boy, this is so sweet and lovely too i like the way you write short and acceptable ideas well done at all luwi

AWESOME POEM! ! ! Beautifully written. God bless you Nora

whoa i love it i like the part when u said Spitting words that can break a heart! Like branches we fall apart

emotions used well here, touching. keep it going.

Very well expressed. Format is beautiful. Felt as though you spoken my new lines in a much effective way. Beautiful craft.

the circle of love.....lol....wonderful piece.....truly enjoyable! :)

You were rhyming, all of a sudden; you stopped. I like your writing, but a rhyming poem is the real deal, that's where the poetic challenges breathe.

Deep emotional write- the theme of love as was and the deep longing to hold onto those tender moments - it's hard to want it so much

just keep on with your emotions getting out of you and one can feel it through your poems... I do like this one

Very descriptive, but can also be a bit more dramatic. Keep up the good work.