Thursday, May 21, 2015

I Can'T See Her Cry Comments

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I cant't see her cry
For when she cries
All the happiness in the world
Seems lost
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Mr. M Jamal
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Samreena Lodhi 27 July 2016

Splendid. words with depth.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

Simply Beautiful... Each lines shows the caring heart.. Beautiful words flowing softly for someone you care in heart.

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Mr. M Jamal 02 June 2015

Bus Geetha g. Kisi ku yaad kar main nay yeh kavita likh de. :) Aur us ki shaadi tay ho gaye: (Sadly. Anyways Dhanewaad :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 May 2015

Gone aghast! . Gone with the wind of life. Nice piece of work.

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Mr. M Jamal 21 May 2015

Thank you Sir :) For your worthy reflection upon my poetry. I am honored :)

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Grace Burke 21 May 2015

very moving shows you are a very caring person

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Mr. M Jamal 21 May 2015

Thank you Grace :) For such encouraging words :) Yes, I do care about those I love :)

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