Wednesday, April 29, 2009

I Can'T Say Goodbye... Comments

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I CAN'T SAY GOOD BYE TO YOU
I CAN'T SAY WELCOME TO YOU
I CAN'T LEAVE THE MATTER IN BETWEEN
I CAN'T EVEN FORGET YOU!
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Saadat Tahir 22 May 2009

i can't say good bye to you i can't say welcome to you i can't leave the matter in between i can't even forget you! hi tara this is an age old dilemma...faced by counless before you and countless who shall follow the feelings come through strong loud and clear very nice...liked the poem cheers

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Bassam Takatkah 13 May 2009

reflecting sincere emotions when ones speaks to himself in full transparency. good idea and good title as well.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 May 2009

nice poem Tara...emotions brought out well in beautiful lines...10

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Yasser Koor 03 May 2009

emmmmmm nice poem, the rhym is great, i like ur wondoring in this poem. well-done cheers yasser

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