Monday, October 3, 2011

I Can’t Let Go Comments

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Dreaming back through life,
Your time-and mine...
I'm in a fix And you are out,
Death let you out,
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David Ration Lekoba
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David Ration Lekoba 03 October 2011

Hey Luis. U r ryt. very ryt. But at a closer look, the poem is not only about death. It more emphasises the triumph of love over death. While the person is not coming back, the love they gave us, the love we give them still lives on. death cannot take that away...while we physicaly myb solitaire, we are emotionaly not alone...look closer at the poem in that direction and tell me what you think... Thanx for your comment.

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David Ration Lekoba

David Ration Lekoba

Botswana, Francistown
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