Friday, August 24, 2007

I Can'T Hold On Any Longer Comments

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You have changed.
You are not the friend I used to know
The friend that I loved and cared about, the friend who was
there for me in good times and bad times
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Tholang Khunyeli
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 March 2008

babies learning how to walk...........they fall....and fall till they triumph..........same goes to us when we grow older.we will rise and fall.........but don't fall forever....

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Scott Austin 16 October 2007

The sadness is felt in the words you have written. But you must never give up on yourself, friends will come and go but what you must understand that family will always be there for you in the long run. So hang in there things will can and will change overtime. Scott

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Debbie Bennett 16 October 2007

You be encouraged Tholong, now you can hold on! Debbie Bennett

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Kefentse Sathekge 16 October 2007

sad poem. are you still falling?

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