The slightest thing it seems will bring, me
back to happier days. To the time when you
were once mine, until we parted ways.
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break ups are painful- universal feeling, yet hope keeps us going- very sad, moving and well expressed.10 Mamta
notwithstanding the parting, the poem reveberates with hope...that's how it should be!
This poem shows full feeling/ expression Well done again Thad Love duncan X
You have truly captured the sad feeling of loss in this poem Thad. A very fine work indeed. Best wishes, Andrew
ouch... I feeeeel the pain... what love does to us hey - well, on the bright side at least we know we still have loving hearts. Imagine not feeling anything at all. Best wishes, T
A sad one mate, hope it's not true my friend... Andy 10
This is so sad Thad, its hard to move on sometimes, hope you can mend your broken heart, well penned, 10 Lynda xx
It is sad but fine poems simultaneously... Have hope.... - who knocks, for them always opens doors.... 10x10 .... Happy New Year, Thad, Tsira