Saturday, January 13, 2007

I Can’t Fight Anymore... Comments

Rating: ★4.8

Yes sir, sure it is but not mine
I can’t anymore it ain’t fine
Who says it’s just and right
Its only corpse and blood in my sight
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jibin joseph
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 March 2008

you have ellaborates discrepancies in a nice writing...........good job.

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Raghavan Warrier 16 January 2007

Very nice write. Full of feelings for the fellow beings and justifiably a little desperate at the state of the world. The repeated use of 'can't ' gets powerful towards the end of poem.

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jibin joseph

jibin joseph

cochin, kerala state, india
jibin joseph
jibin joseph
cochin, kerala state, india
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