Have you ever been so lost
Ever needed to just cry
So you let loose your eyes
But you always got by
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A lovely and well encapsulated piece of poetry penned with insight. The articulation of your train of thoughts doesn't seem like that of a novice. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
This poetic expression of a state of depression is a masterpiece in itself. I have no words to appreciate your composition which is an honest account of a heavy heart. You deserve full marks. Best wishes.
Not bad at all for a novice...Many people, of which I am one, do not show their grief, sadness or any depressive emotions through tears...Furthermore, many of these non-cryers are more sympathetic, sensitive and empathetic than those who cry at a drop of a hat...Absolute human emotion comes from the heart, and that's what counts. albeit, it can certainly place a strain on someone who wants to let it out and clear their locked-in grief, as your above work quite skillfully projects ~FjR~
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