Wednesday, June 3, 2009

I Can'T..... But I Can Comments

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I can't able to give you a reason for why obstacles in this life occur
But I can be right beside you every step of the way helping you and listening to you searching for a solution.
I can't change what has happened in our past all the challenges, heartaches, and pain that we have been through.
But together we can be strong and nto let them happen again
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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 21 July 2009

The back and forth writing style iz interesting, always haz been. Only some people can pull it off, but you are one of them. Whoever this iz must be very dear to you. And you are a great friend to stand by them. Great piece Scale 1-10...10 ~*~SG

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

Ewwwwwwwwwww....quite fascinating you rumble with the cants and cans, thats marvellous works dear! ! !

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Life Poem 13 June 2009

Splendid work, you really thought out each word

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Eyan Desir 11 June 2009

Nice love letter 10s

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James Mclain 10 June 2009

shiny shine...you shine, in this life and in the other life your heart is true.. it is not as you though or would think..it is in front of you why did you blink...iip

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Oneline Poet 06 June 2009

Nice. Very touching.

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James Mclain 05 June 2009

this needle of thin upon ones heart you place, sews more than a psych or small hole you think that was made stars consumed in dawns grey pink of trails...iip

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