Thursday, April 30, 2015

I Can'T Breathe Comments

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I CAN'T BREATHE
My life is not mine to sojourn with others, as I live within my corridors of hatred.

I hear the silent thoughts of others, with temptations of actions that burn their desires.
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Supreme word

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Mysia Hayling 29 August 2019

Very powerful and deep poem, the insightful thoughts allows the reader to think deeper. Great work.

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Prabir Gayen 29 November 2018

Beautiful poem.........full of emotions...thanks

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Marsha L Ceniceros 19 August 2018

Deeply emotional, very powerful. Great writing!

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Howard Savage 05 January 2016

I can't breath, is a powerful poem.

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Heaven Jackson 30 April 2015

wow this is good.write more.plz

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Captain Herbert Poetry 30 April 2015

Brilliant and superb

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