Thursday, November 8, 2007

I Can'T Believe Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't believe,
That nobody listens to me,
To what I have to say.
I can't believe,
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Selina Gurgacz
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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2007

This poem is written from the heart. You can feel it. It also flows really well. The repetition of 'I can't believe' emphasizes your angst and outrage. Strong gusty writing. love, Allie xxxx

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Selina Gurgacz

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