Tuesday, February 24, 2009

I Can Show You How 2 Love Comments

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Yeah, you were good at playing the fox girl
When I was good you threw me a bone
But I don't play games with nobody
And I wasn't a fool to bring you home
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Corey Campbell (BlackChild)
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

This was a fascinating story poem really. It told about the love experience of the writer in great detail. I love to read stories in poems. You can learn so much from them. I hope it comes to fruition. This love story. It seems there will be more verses to this poem. However it goes, it was written pretty well. As long as it can be understood, it is a success. No problems on that score. GW62

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