Tuesday, July 31, 2012

I Can Sense It Coming Comments

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I can sense it coming
I hear it from within
The words are here
A poem-
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Shalom Freedman
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Walterrean Salley 06 August 2012

I can also feel when a poem is stirring within. Many times the result is not what I desire, so I tweak to shape, develop and perfect it—turning it into something acceptable and to my liking. As poets, sometimes we just have to toil with a certain piece. ‘Tis the poet birthing and nurturing a poem.

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Louis Cecile 31 July 2012

Nice question posed and the cliffhanger of an ending is well conceived. Very good.

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