Wednesday, December 22, 2010

I Can See The World's Dismays Comments

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I see the world’s
faces in dismays
Where mothers yell
awaking deaths.
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Sylva Portoian
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Joseph Anderson 01 June 2012

It is so admirable, the passion in your writing.Will we ever see a world of equality. peace, love and freedom for all mankind? Wouldn't that be wonderful. A potent write, Disturbingly powerful

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

I see the world full of green fleshes Kind people cry slayers dine, dance. Sylva, our world is full of injustice. Mostly, it's the innocent that suffers. Sometimes, one wonders: how could this be? And yet we remain powerless to change it all. Thanks for raising the awareness. 10

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