Wednesday, March 12, 2008

I Can No Longer Live For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I spent my life loving you-
not someone like you, but YOU;
not a part of you, but YOU.
I spent my life knowing you,
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Cierra Chamblee 16 July 2008

This poem has said it all.You wrote my emotions down for me.Thank you! ! !

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Rani Turton 21 March 2008

All the turmoil of passion and its pain. Powerful and evocative. Thanks.

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Geovanni Leaño 20 March 2008

nice! honestly, i felt this one in the past... thanks for sharing! 10!

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Emmanuel Jones 12 March 2008

One of the best poems I've ever read. These emotions you wrote with are written on my heart, you just had the heart to say it. Thank you.

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Sreelekha Premjit 12 March 2008

This is wonderful poetry. I enjoyed reading it immensely.

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