Thursday, June 22, 2006

I Can Never Get Enough Of You! Comments

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My love,
My breath, my life, song of my soul,
my heart dances within me
with my every thought of you.
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William Jackson
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*Trusting You* 23 December 2008

My love, My breath, my life, song of my soul, my heart dances within me with my every thought of you. I love those lines... so romantic. great job. Becca

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K. V. Venkataramana 09 March 2008

Your intense love for your beloved is palpable in your poem. K V Venkataramana

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L Pierson 17 June 2007

This leaves me filled with longing.Love it.

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Nalini Hebbar 05 July 2006

thats sweet...i should read this to my husband...very very romantic...love...nalini

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Patricia Gale 22 June 2006

Sweet and filled with love and desire.

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trisha evensen 22 June 2006

very lovely and full of emotion Trisha

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William Jackson

William Jackson

San Antonio, Texas
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