Monday, September 14, 2009

'I Can Never Find Another You' Comments

Rating: 4.6

Walking down the streams;
My mind was filled with your dreams.
Your sweet smile will make me come up,
Your strong hands will make me give up,
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elsee daniel
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Lindbergh Hughes 09 October 2009

Very beautiful! 'I can never find another you' - What a beautiful, nice and sweet phrase!

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Aparna Sinha 23 September 2009

oh..beautiful expressions... plaese keep on writing

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Annabel Sheila 15 September 2009

Sweet write. Speaks of the innocence of a first love maybe? Nicely expressed words of devotion. Anna

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Deborah Cromer 15 September 2009

Very beautiful and delicately expressed. Nice, heartfelt words and warmth. Well done. DC

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Raj Nandy 14 September 2009

A NICE LYRICAL POEM! BUT HAVE YOU READ IT OUT TO YOUR SPECIAL 'YOU'? -Raj

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Surya . 14 September 2009

great love.great feel.great poem.great poet. voted10 surya

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Mubeen Sadhika 14 September 2009

Very soft. Beautifully written. Nice.

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Amazingly romantic! well done Elsee!

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Angel's lyre 14 September 2009

good rhyming, impressive lines. keep writing... be blessed!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 14 September 2009

its a very nice short love poem, well written.. keep writing.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

.............................very romantic!

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Broken Heart 14 September 2009

OMG! ! really an awesome poem! ! loved it! ! loved the rythm n the flow! ! <3 hpe u hve some time to read my poems too! ! tc

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