Walking down the streams;
My mind was filled with your dreams.
Your sweet smile will make me come up,
Your strong hands will make me give up,
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Sweet write. Speaks of the innocence of a first love maybe? Nicely expressed words of devotion. Anna
Very beautiful and delicately expressed. Nice, heartfelt words and warmth. Well done. DC
A NICE LYRICAL POEM! BUT HAVE YOU READ IT OUT TO YOUR SPECIAL 'YOU'? -Raj
Amazingly romantic! well done Elsee!
good rhyming, impressive lines. keep writing... be blessed!
its a very nice short love poem, well written.. keep writing.
OMG! ! really an awesome poem! ! loved it! ! loved the rythm n the flow! ! <3 hpe u hve some time to read my poems too! ! tc
Very beautiful! 'I can never find another you' - What a beautiful, nice and sweet phrase!