Saturday, October 13, 2007

I Can Love, I Can Feel My Love For You... Comments

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i can love,
i can feel...
i can't heel this long
jagged scar, in my heart you made.
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Morgan Evans
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Michael Gale 26 October 2007

I must say that you show great promise as a futured great poet, and this poem was excellant. Keep pluggin' and writing and never give up. In high school, a few courses in literature and spelling and English will add strength to your abilities in the near future, as you are a natural at poetry! Good luck and may God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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