I can just about picture you all sat there.
My beloved family and freinds.
Within the wake of my suicide.
Not relly knowing way.
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The sentiment is understood and shoots right through (all of) your work. These are thoughts occurs to many of us and so strike a chord, and this much in itself makes for a good piece. But suicide isn't something to be done for effect. Those friends and family to whom you would apologise are there to talk to.
Amy, I agree with Tara, there is always someone to talk to. Please do this, talk to someone who will listen. Love, Fran xx