Tuesday, November 1, 2011

I Can Feel You Comments

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I dream not riches but a night
Lit by a dim sweet moon light
Me and my sweet loving sweetheart
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Jahan Zeb
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Stevie Taite 18 October 2012

Definately a better dream than riches. To feel love like this once bathes the soul in priceless richness. very romantic write

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Persian Khushi 27 September 2012

love holding hands, looking into eyes, no need for words, the moon, dimly lit sky, my beloved and I.

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2012

really a romantic poem indeed, vivid imagery makes ur poem more reflective

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Aditi Khandelwal 04 November 2011

A very sweet and beautiful poem...

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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