Sunday, December 4, 2016

I Can Feel You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh singer! the fact that you know?
When those words jumping out of your mouth
One after the other, form a row
Dancing in a tune, holding every beat, they go on flow
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Jaya Das
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Pijush Biswas 04 December 2016

mind blowing... touches my heart really... try your best... rhyme and rhythm are to be more developed... good,

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Jaya Das 04 December 2016

Thank you so much sir n thanks a lot for your suggestion surely work into it

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Siddartha Montik 04 December 2016

You made it so is many must Love the idea of Love with this Poem! thanks for sharing! 10++

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Jaya Das 04 December 2016

Many many thanks ☺☺

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Sister Frances 04 December 2016

You've used music as a beautiful metaphor throughout this poem. Very clever my friend. I loved the way this love song took me on a journey :)

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Jaya Das 04 December 2016

Thank you for your words of appreciation

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