Tuesday, June 26, 2012

I Can Feel..... (The Change Coming) Comments

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i can feel the change coming,
the dark swell of the clouds.
the rumble that shakes the streets,
i can smell buildings on fire.
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Eric Cockrell
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Dave Walker 27 June 2012

A fantastic poem, I'm with you, the things that we don't see should scare us the most. If we can not see it we can not fight it, we are at the mercy of it.

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Pheko Motaung 27 June 2012

A fantastic poem! Not only do you expose the bad shape that the world is in but you give us hope that gradually we are overcoming the might of the strong who will rest content if we allow ourselves to be lulled into the false sense of security while by stealth and guile they mow us down! Thank you

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Danny Draper 27 June 2012

The World has seen such times before and some places see such scenes still, but luckily in reality such scenes are diminishing as we seek better and more peaceful ways to live and resolve conflict. We will prevail and a better way will continue to unfold. Dramatic write however with great energy.

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Kaila George 26 June 2012

You feel it too...this is so close to what I feel, cant explain just a feeling it never goes away. But this is so gut renching this poem, makes me want to run and hide. As always brillant Mr Cockrell

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Eric Cockrell 26 June 2012

sometimes we see things that disturb us.... it's what we dont see that disturbs me most!

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