(Dedicated to my husband Abichal)
I can feel
your unfathomable love
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I am of your age dear Poetess. I do have the same feel for my wife. You have universalised the private passions. This is what a good poet can do. Plz read my poems on love and nature.
Passionate poem…emotions oozing…fine metaphor…debonair…but poet is apprehensive of dislodgement …well in over powering love such concern is just where both make a Union One … Since time immemorial ILY … has been expressed and felt my myriad and innumerable model and canvas… All time matchless and All time most spoken ‘Triplet’ ...word codon* with many billion permutation and combinations…expressible… connotable… and never has any cordon… Thanks Didi for such moving and touching poetry … Thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10+ * [A specific sequence of three adjacent nucleotides on a strand of DNA or RNA that specifies the genetic code information for synthesizing a particular amino acid] n
can feel your unfathomable love for me, sealed in a container, outshines my flow of love entailing ostensible exposure... a nice feeling to have in love.. it is universal and can be felt anywhere t any time... you may also feel its pulse.. nicely put in words....10
Time immemorially has eluded you, utterance of three perpetual words “I LOVE YOU................................... love splashes by whispers of endearment ocean overwhelms by call of tidal songs sky is blue, sea is yet blue, both yet croon on lap of grace trembling across crest and trough..............as yet that happens to happen by blazing gleams of glory all through years being together, and quest still persists even if storm may shake flow of love overpowering., most emotive write from a soul yet untold by amalgamation two hearts, ingenious write.,10+++, thanks for sharing.......
Wonderful poem, excellent, very romantic.Male chauvinism is always dominating us.Your feeling reflects the feelings of eighty percent of the women of the world