Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
Tuesday, October 10, 2017

I Can Do Better Than You Comments

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What commuters in cars

really really want
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Douglas Scotney
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Bri Edwards 11 October 2017

the title reminds me of a song. to MyPoemList. ============================= are you, Doug, talking about the commuter drivers or passengers? ? ? we all drive hands-free-of-the-steering-wheel HERE in California! ! ! yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :) p.s. to lay back in their cars, ..............i would use lie back or lean back i especially like this line: No; more.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

There is competition everywhere. Obviously you can be better than others and you ca be victorious. Determination and nice attitude is expressed in this poem...10

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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