Tuesday, March 17, 2009

I Can Do Better Comments

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I hear your words, words of hate.
What have i done? We used to be so great.
You treat me like muck on your shoe,
I try my best, I've stood by you.
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Alexandria Valena
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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

This poem is well written. Bien!

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Stephen Szachnitowski 03 March 2010

An abusive relationship... I've been around people in some. The way you wrote this, conveying the emotions... you did well.

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Chhavi Anupam 17 March 2009

Beautful Alexandria keep writing Chhavi Anupam

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