I Can Die Comments

For a moment of relief For you and your belief To alleviate a grain of pain To walk a step with you everyday I can die, I must say.... I know how it feels like to wish to live a life-time in a moment..it took my breath away. thanks Niks for writing such a lovely and divine poem. 18th August,2009

A flowing emotional poem that touches on the hearts of your readers. Please don't die as we need good writers like you Nikunj. Top marks Karin Anderson

anyone can die for these things..........nice write Nikunj

this is truly a poetic piece..nice to read..expressions to the max..grace

very emotional lines You are lucky to have such a person to die for regards sandhya

a poem full of emotions and your belief To alleviate a grain of pain To walk a step with you everyday I can die, I must

emotional piece nikunj.depicts a nice, caring, understading soul in u. lucky is the one for whom u wrote.

Oh, come on, don't die! This is a beautiful piece. Thank you for making me smile: -)

If you die....Who will write in your place? :) No one can replace your works like you write them. Deborah Cromer

wow....expression of great and burning love... very lucky girl...someone who is willing to die for her... very meaningful.... so lovely...very touching poem.. i love this... 10++++ lovelots, maia

must say 'She' is one lucky girl to have u as that one who can die fr her with such intensity.... :)

wowwwwwww lovely Niks if you can die for her for so many little things I can imagine your love for her --how lucky she is? I wish I was in her boots lol! ! ! ! -10 anjali

the person about whom you have written, if read this poem will die for you... nice poem, true heart felt tender words

Heartfelt and lovely written poem...nice in vividness of words....

passionate love reflected here.. nice write